Monday, 15 April 2013

#12 - When A Door Closes A Window Breaks

Used no prompt, had no idea what the poem would be about till I wrote it. Experiment. I hope this sparks ideas for 'real', good poetry in the next few months.

When A Door Closes A Window Breaks

Lost keys
Found under floorboards.
Window is broken
Handle is stuck -
Open a door instead.

Behind the pane I 
See blue.
No access.
Through the door I go
Too slow -
Nobody there just
Dusty paths.

I'll just walk on till
We meet.

2 comments:

  1. Interesting. I can see lots of potential here, though is good by itself. It's even got me thinking of some new poems.

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    1. Thanks!! I hope to go over them in a few months and glean ideas from them! :)

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